diff --git a/src/AboutUs/AboutUs.css b/src/AboutUs/AboutUs.css index 8d3463c..3536be4 100644 --- a/src/AboutUs/AboutUs.css +++ b/src/AboutUs/AboutUs.css @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ flex-direction: column; justify-content: flex-start; padding: 0svh 1svw; - max-width: 700px; + max-width: 800px; } #about-competitions { diff --git a/src/AboutUs/AboutUs.js b/src/AboutUs/AboutUs.js index 89966e6..a02630b 100644 --- a/src/AboutUs/AboutUs.js +++ b/src/AboutUs/AboutUs.js @@ -57,14 +57,12 @@ const AboutsUs = () => { Engineers (SAE) every year.
- We're dedicated to giving members hands-on experience working on - the car, which allows them to both learn new skills and + Our members are given opportunities to gain hands-on experience + working on the car, which allows them to both learn new skills and techniques, such as using Solidworks, Ansys, machining, and welding, as well as utilizing knowledge learned from classrooms. - This is done with practical projects, allowing students to build - skills and knowledge that employers are looking for. We strive to - bridge the gap between education and application, making learning - effective and memorable. + This is done with practical projects, allowing members to build + skills and knowledge that employers are looking for.
@@ -83,13 +81,12 @@ const AboutsUs = () => {Every year, we take our car to the United States to compete against other teams from all across the globe. Teams from - universities design, build, and race these all-terrain vehicles - that are capable of going through a series of rough courses, as - well as discuss their findings, such as cost reports and design - choices, all in a series of dynamic and static events. We also get - the chance to connect with engineering students from around the - world, trading advice and making new friends, and network with - sponsors to explore future job opportunities. + universities design, build, and race these vehicles capable of + going through a series of rough courses. In addition, teams + discuss their findings, such as cost reports and design choices. + All of this is done in a series of dynamic and static events. On + top of this, we also get the chance to connect with students and + sponsors from all over the world.
@@ -100,106 +97,23 @@ const AboutsUs = () => { Static events are where the whole team steps away from building the car and takes a look at the professional and analytical aspect of the team. The business presentation, cost event, and technical - inspection are all events that are equally important as the actual - car, as this is where we show real-world understanding of - engineering, manufacturing, and business decisions. It's not only - about making the car, it's also about demonstrating a clear - understanding behind design rationale, cost efficiency, and - marketability within a competitive industry. + inspection are all events where we show real-world understanding + of engineering, manufacturing, and business decisions. This is + done through presentations and tests before the race. - {/*- In collaboration with the rest of the team, develops a concept - proposal and presents it to a panel of industry judges to gain - support, such as funding. -
-- - bruh idfk DESIGN - The team presents the design, research, - and testing of the vehicle to a panel of judges. -
-- (maybe take off) - Judges inspect every aspect of the car in - order to make sure it complies with competition rules and - ensure safety. -
-- (maybe sperate? ie Frame Tech, Engine Tech, General Tech, - etc.) -
-- Dynamic events are where the car is actually put to the test, with - different events each made to test a certain aspect of the car. - Acceleration, sled pull, hill climb and maneuverability are all - events that show how our vehicle does against other teams. After - all these events, the finale comes in the form of the endurance - event, a four-hour race filled with jumps, pits, and other - obstacles, and teams compete to see how many laps the cars can - make. It combines all the factors from previous events, on top of - the reliability of our car. + Dynamic events put the car to the test, each one targeting a + specific aspect of its capability. Acceleration, sled pull, hill + climb and maneuverability are all events that compare our + performance against other teams. After that, we compete in the + endurance event, a four-hour race filled with many obstacles to + see how many laps each car can complete. This combines all the + factors from previous events, on top of the reliability of our + car.
- {/*The cars is tested to see if all four wheels stop
-The car is tested for speed by uhh i forgot
-The car's torque is tested by pulling variable load
-- The car is tested to see how high the car can climb up a - variable slope -
-- Obstacle course, where the fastest and most accurate vehicles - are awarded more points -
-- This one is self explanitory, drive over boulders and large - logs -
-- All the cars in the competition race for four hours, seeing - how many laps each car can handle. This event is worth the - most points and is the most exciting. -
-- Fun Fact: This is the only wheel to wheel event that SAE - hosts. -
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